There is a term in writing…”Don’t tell….Show”
If I like you to know that there is thunder storm about to hit the city….I can’t just write that there is thunder storm coming…
I would rather write:
Though it was dark all around….I could see his face time to time by the lightning of sky…and every light followed by the thunder sound scared me too much to clutch his hands….we couldn’t balanced ourselves because of the strong air moving in between…sometimes I have to lean on his shoulders to keep walking…we have to reach for some shelter….may be he was too busy in his reasoning to even noticed me throwing my whole weight on him… suddenly…I felt something moistening our hands grip….and within seconds I realized that rain has begun….
How you like it?
I think you got the picture well….yeah???
In this way I will take you to my imaginations…but never will let you go away with your own…
...when reading a novel you got paralyzed totally dependent on the writer…..you can’t make decisions…you can’t imagine…you have to close the book if it is the end…no matter how differently you wanted it to be….but it’s not your choice.
The extra ordinary feature of Charlotte Bronte’s writing is….she not even entrapped you in her imaginations but also let you go away with your own too….
So many times in her novel you will find yourself wondering from here to there to find exact match to fulfill your desires too…and she….never mind.
In “Jan Eyre”….this isn’t a scene…..but….I’d like to see the portraits that Jane paints….
One of Blanche Ingram and one of herself….I’d like to see how she sees herself….and how she painted her rival.
The most amazing fact was that Jane while painting those pictures didn't even consider herself as a rival to Ingram.
Now…imagine…if you are giving a choice to paint yourself and your rival….how would you go about that?
Ingram…a beautiful…rich….confident woman….noticed by Rochester…
Jane seen her….having good time with Rochester….totally agreed that Ingram would soon be the Mrs. Rochester…
Jane had no hopes...but why than she painted both her and Ingram same time?
Ahh…it’s always heart breaking to have your rival front of you…having fun and good time with your loved one…
....and acknowledging that you doesn't stand a single chance....hmmm....
ترجمہ
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بہترین ترجمہ کی تعریف، بہترین الفاظ میں ہمیشہ یہی کی جاتی ہے کہ ’’یہ ترجمہ
نہیں لگتا۔۔۔‘‘ بہترین مترجم وہی ہے جو اپنے ترجمہ میں خود کہیں دکھائی نہیں
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1 week ago
Hmmmm...Charlotte Bronte! Such a wonderful author. I loved the way she weaves magic with words and emotions. Thanks for this post on my fav author!
ReplyDeleteLoved!
ReplyDeletehi...good post !
ReplyDeleteohh..my favourite stories.must have been much better if jane eyer would have been a bit prettier..
ReplyDeleteNot just heart-breaking but it would be quite a torturous one if you were to see your love with somebody else and if you had slim chances to be with him.
ReplyDeleteCloud Nine
ReplyDeleteI simply love Charlotte Brinte...tahnks for coming. I am honored.
Noor Ali
Thank you so much. I am honored.
Anonymous Thanks !
Maham
hmm...I think thats why I like Charlotte Bronte...beacue her heroin may not have the looks but they are all have strong characters and to win someone's heart...you may need to have good looks....but to complete a man...you must have strong chahrater.
I hope you will look at Jane differently now.
Thanks for coming...I am honored.
Sh@s
Thanks for understanding and thanks for coming. I am honored.
Have you seen this recently discovered photograph of Charlotte Brontë taken in 1854?
ReplyDeletehmm...Qayoom Sahib...
ReplyDeleteThank you for shairng the picture with me.
I am honored.
Thinking,
ReplyDeleteI have not read any book by her so far. So I can not say anything.
Take care
Dear Jack...hmmm...you don't need to as well...but I will recommend Bronte...if you get chance someday...
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming.